Entries that were not picked

Example 1

One fine day a disease attacked Singapore and people of Singapore from all different defenses came together with one objective to help each other to fight the disease. The cooperation and collaboration from different personnel unit united to fight the disease. They demonstrated togetherness and keeping the situation calm which ultimately they managed to overcome the outbreak.

Why this entry was not picked:

  • The idea lacks specifics and depth. It is too generic (e.g. “a disease”, “all different defences”, “different personnel unit”).
  • It lacks details in the Total Defence messaging, e.g. “They demonstrated togetherness and keeping the situation calm which ultimately they managed to overcome the outbreak.” What exactly did the characters do? What is remarkable about them? What are the specific difficulties they overcame?
  • It is not visual; reading it, the judges could not picture what the story would look like on screen.

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